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Developmental Editing

Duration: 4 to 6 weeks

Price:

$750 for manuscripts 300 pages and up (75,000+ words)

$350 for manuscripts 299 pages and below (74,750 words or less)

Payment Plans: Flexible options available upon request
Perfect For: Fiction writers crafting novels or novellas in Southern Gothic, literary fiction, or related genres, seeking to refine their story’s structure and prepare for publishing.

 

Transform your novel into a compelling, publication-ready masterpiece with my Developmental Editing Service. As a Southern Gothic author with an MFA in Fiction from Emerson College and publications in The Avenue Journal, Your Tango, Baltimore Style, and A Sufferer’s Digest, I specialize in crafting haunting narratives with vivid characters and atmospheric depth. Whether you’re a beginner shaping your first draft or an experienced writer polishing a manuscript for agents, I’ll provide detailed, actionable feedback to elevate your story’s plot, pacing, characters, themes, and genre-specific elements.

Developmental Editing 

What You’ll Receive:

  • Comprehensive Editorial Letter: A 5–10-page document detailing your manuscript’s strengths, weaknesses, and specific recommendations for improvement. Expect tailored advice on structure, character arcs, pacing, world-building, and genre alignment (e.g., enhancing Southern Gothic’s eerie tone or emotional resonance).

  • In-Line Comments: Tracked changes and margin notes in your manuscript (Microsoft Word or Google Docs), pinpointing areas for revision, such as plot holes, weak transitions, or underdeveloped themes.

  • Clean Version (Optional): A draft with suggested edits accepted, providing a clear view of potential improvements.

  • Follow-Up Consultation: A 30-minute Zoom or phone call to discuss feedback, answer questions, and guide your revision process, ensuring you’re confident moving forward.

  • Bonus: Unlimited email support during the editing period for quick clarifications.

 

Why Choose My Developmental Editing?​

  • Tailored Expertise: My MFA and industry experience ensures your manuscript will stand out to agents and readers.

  • Holistic Support: From structural revisions to polished prose and publishing strategy, this all-in-one package transforms your novel and equips you to succeed in the publishing world.

  • Personalized Approach: Every edit is tailored to your vision, whether you’re refining a 20,000-word novella or a 100,000-word epic.

  • Proven Credentials: My MFA, published works, and publishing industry experience mean you’re working with a professional who understands both craft and the publishing industry.

 

Pricing

  • Manuscripts 299 Pages and Below (74,750 words or less): $350
    Ideal for novellas, shorter novels, or early drafts needing focused feedback.

  • Manuscripts 300 Pages and Up (75,000+ words): $750
    Perfect for full-length novels requiring in-depth structural and thematic refinement.
    Rates are based on 250 words per page. For precise quotes, request a free sample edit.

 

How It Works

  1. Submit Your Manuscript: Send your novel or novella for a free 1,000-word sample edit to assess its needs and confirm pricing.

  2. Developmental Editing (Weeks 1–4): Receive your editorial letter, in-line comments, and optional clean draft, with feedback tailored to your story’s goals.

  3. Consultation (Week 5–6): Join a 30-minute call to discuss revisions and plan next steps, whether revising for submission or pairing with my coaching services.

  4. Revise with Confidence: Use the detailed feedback to strengthen your manuscript, with email support for any questions.

 

Ready to Elevate Your Novel?

Let’s shape your story into a work that captivates readers and impresses publishers. Contact me today for a free 1,000-word sample edit and a personalized consultation to discuss your manuscript’s potential.

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